Black Poetry : His Butterfly...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Confessions of the heart…
    Still here waiting for you
    ………..Waiting for you

    Heavy in my heart
    Lonely in my soul
    Love got me hard
    As I fall for you
    The time slowly dies
    Tears run from my eyes
    You came and woke me up
    And I am still here waiting

    Confessions of the heart…
    Still here waiting for you
    ………..Waiting for you


    Wishing on a star above…….
    Colors of the sky fades
    Like a fragile Butterfly……
    Flowing in the maze of us
    Lost in the wind
    Seems like a phase as I drown
    In the passion of you
    ……………..Take my hand
    Lead me to the water of love
    Overflow in the magic of us

    Confessions of the heart…
    Still here waiting for you
    ………..Waiting for you

    Cant breath
    Blind to see
    But it feels so good
    Take me away
    I am still here waiting
    Waiting on you
    Wishing and praying
    Butterfly….
    The spirit is drowning
    As the colors become faded
    I can’t seem to fly with out you
    But I hear you calling
    Butterfly
    Butterfly
    As I try once more
    Butterfly…..

    Confessions of the heart…
    Still here waiting for you
    ………..Waiting for you

    Your butterfly....

    (C) A blkangel Thang
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Confessions of the heart...frees the soul. And here's another confession: "no one willingly opens their hands...and let a beautiful butterfly...fly away" this is a very nice piece and I can relate...very well.
     
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    Hey, Angel

    I agree with Queen. Sometimes we love someone so deeply, that we hold on for dear life. This was beautiful, poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful butterflies flap
    and very unique very lovely
    this was touching and sweetly pose'd
    flow on sistah speak!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is really beautiful, sis. :grouphug:
     
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    This was as lovely as a butterfly in flight.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel, the more of your pieces I read
    the more I realize just how fortunate
    this guy is...

    some of us don't know what it is to have someone
    "still waiting"

    [email protected] that's tight

    i'm still waitin' to find some body still waitin' :confused:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Touching..breath taking...magnificent...beautiful.

    :thanks: for sharing a special part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Asome work here MBA, Angel yuou did your thing and droped a fresh and touching poem here within your confessions of your heart. :spinn:
     
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