Quiet Poetry Lounge : His Brown eyes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PurpleMoons, Apr 11, 2004.

  1. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    HIS BROWN EYES

    Pastel purple, ...............splashed across the walls
    an abundace of large oak trees standing full and tall
    a small spring,............... ramping wild downhill
    Frogs croaking, water splashing, pure essence of appeal
    the sounds of moving water dancing with the clouds
    A beautiful sun bathe sky, humming strong and loud
    This is what I see when I look into his soul
    his brown eyes enchants me in his magnificent hold
    although he's not here his spirit brings all
    and these images manifest
    when looking ............at the murrel on the wall

    Blue jays songs,................ whisping on the winds
    A large purple orchids field.....swaying with every bend
    chocolate fat babies playing in the nude
    sugar plums fairies dodging in and out of tubes
    one gentle kiss brushed across my suppled lips
    Two warm hands resting on my curvy hips
    Butterfly drippings nurishing every flower
    Honeysuckle dew sprinkled with every shower
    This is what I see when I look into his soul
    his brown eyes enchants me in his magnificent hold
    although he's not here his spirit brings all
    and these images manifest
    when looking........... at the murrel on the wall
    He has captured me and I dont ever want to be free
    enbracing his soul.......... I've fallen neck deep
    I've fallen neck deep into the essence of his..... eyes
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow....your word usage here just draws us in to those serene images of nature created by his brown eyes. This was awesome.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my u had me looking deep for a min.
    this was awesome
     
  4. PurpleMoons

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    Thank you! Watz
    i find your scribes
    to be awesome as well

    LoL!Rich!
    You so crazy!

    Thank you both for the
    respond and support!
     
  5. Earthly Allure

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    Hmmmmm very delicious, for a moment I thought you were speaking of my brown eyes! lOL
     
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    (smiling) Hmmmm!
    Who said that I
    was'nt Allure? :luvv:
    Thanks for the read!
     
  7. skalion

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    Very natural and enriching piece. The type of stuff that comes from the soul.
     
  8. SensualReality

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    I felt like I was in a robot...lol that was good
     
  9. PurpleMoons

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    ah! Thank you Skalion!

    Hey sensual!, Lil' Sis, Give me a hug! lol
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dunno how settle for a wink?lol :wink:
     
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