Black Poetry : His Bite....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The bite of his love
    Ran thru my veins
    As comfort
    came to my soul…
    I knew then
    I could not
    resist him…
    As he lead
    me to my awaking…
    like a wolf howling
    at the moon…
    my inner self called
    Feelin him like
    no other creature…
    The love poured
    Out….
    Offering ourselves to
    become one
    Into the night..
    we took
    flight
    upon the
    heavens as the
    Symphony
    plays a sweet
    love song that
    interlaces the
    spirits and bonding..of
    two yearning hearts…
    he searches my soul…
    as I hold his heart
    our bodies
    gracing in
    the shadows
    of the moon
    as stars pranced
    around us..
    In heavenly bliss…
    Our moans were
    of thunder
    As the lighting
    was of two souls
    Interlacing
    in a dance
    rain became our
    tears as
    the storm grows..
    a mystical magic
    took structure
    as the morning
    sun rises as we awake
    in each others arms..
    a rainbow floats above...... :hot:

    a taste of blkangel....:angel1:
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as the sunrise this poem is devine
    nice indeed
    Peace
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No surprise to me, you created another work of art...This is great.
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, i was lovin' this piece...like i could hear all of the movements of nature during this union...tite girl!
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen,

    Beautiful piece.


    blak
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this has some new flavor to it...
    love the new level

    and my favorite part....
    was this:

    As he lead
    me to my awaking…



    I sooooo relate...
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Too Tough, just right
    Overbite-tight!
     
  8. nemasis119

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    Girl, this was very deep......

    and like Redlady replied, you feel the could feel the movement of nature during this union
    Girl, this was truly hot...I saw a whole new side of you!!!
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl this is sooooo pretty. and I agree with angelic - you continue to evolve. it's nice to see. :)
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater and watzinaname and nemasis119
    i am so glad you enjoyed the piece thank you for your support and love...:angel1:

    redlady.... coming from you this means alot thank you again...

    angelicsage well all i can say is thank you...at times i go here not alot...but the support you give and love from day one means alot thank you

    1poetsought and blakverb thank ya for da love....:angel1:

    gempis..sis i am glad you likes..much love...:angel1:
     
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