Black Short Stories : Hip-Hop Suga

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    'Please don't hate me cuz I am beauitful... Hate me cuz your man want me," shouted 19 year old, Necole Hardin to a fellow friend down the hallway.
    'Whatever Necole......................'
    Necole Hardin was smart, successful, intrigued by life, and everything someone needed/wanted in their life.She had just been recruited by the hottest magazine in America, Da Word. Da Word was the biggest hip-hop magazine in America at the time. To work there, your style had to be one of a kind and Necole Hardin had it. She was very beautiful. Her hair was glistening and long. Her eye color was a natural grayish-blue. Her ethnicity was African-American/PuertoRican. Her mom being black, her dad being hispanic. Her personality too was one of a kind. Her being a Gemini, she was often moody but always happy regardless of the situation.Also, she did catch attitude but only when she was irritable when someone made her like that. When she was in high school, most girls envied her but boys wanted her but she did give into the high school love affair once. But being hurt made her close her heart to new intruders.
    As walking into her cubby, Necole cut on the radio to 93.3 the hottest radio station in Austin. 'What the hook gonna be?' rapped Murphy Lee over the air way.
    'I don't even know....' replied Necole like Murphy was sending a message to her personally.
    Necole's cubby's phone started ringing loudly....
    'Hello.. Necole Hardin...' said Necole slowly.... She often said everyday if she wasn't taking a personal holiday from the writing.
    'Um... yes... Ms. Hardin... I got someone for you to interview tonight at the club, 5. I can't make it and I trust you with this one...' said CEO, Tomas King.
    'Yeah, sure... I am up for anything right now. May I ask who the lovely person is?' said Necole through inhaling a breathe in.
    'It's the new artist, Jada West.....'
    Jada West was this 18 year old artist just starting off. She was so beautiful. She was brown skin with an unique eye color.One of Jada West's eyes was blue and the other was gray. That was unusual eye color for her because she was from African-American decent.But she could sing others right out of business. When she came to the business, she admitted to her record company that she was not a pop singer and will never be. She was everything the hip-hop community was looking for. She was Jada West. Also, she made a public announcement that she was gay too. Oh how the nation loved how she kept it real with herself and all her fans.
    'Jada West, sir?' asked Necole happily.'I would be honored with that job, Mr. King'
    'Thank you, Necole.....'
    'Your welcome....'
    The line went dead. Thinking to herself, Necole realized that now she had to get off to buy something new to impress Ms. West.
    'Ms. Hardin.... will you be back today?' asked her sectary, Minny Johnson. Necole loved being in charge for the first time in her young now beginning life.
    'No..... can you Minny cancel all appointments for the rest of day? And you need to go home yourself.. Take the rest of the day off.....' said Necole happily.
    'Yes.... for you, sure can....' replied Minny....

    7:00 p.m. read Necole's clock...
    'Da**, all I got is 15 mins until I meet Jada West. And my da** questions just got washed away when my drink fell on the sheet of paper..' said Necole to her friend, Jomar Stump over her cell phone. Jomar Stump was this brother attending UT of Austin. He was very intellectual. He was fine to all the sisters in Austin and neighborring cities. He was light skinned with dreads. His eyes was hazel, orange pretty like the sunrise.
    'You are an journalist. You will think of something. Just relax. Tell me how fine Jada West is later. I got to go. Wifey, Yvonne is tripping....... Relax, Necole' said Jomar...
    'Okay.... then..... Thanks.....'
    The line went dead....
    Glazing towards the stage, Necole watched Jada West. Jada was hitting a high note. Jada's grace was so amazing to watch.
    'Excuse, Ms. Hardin......' said the owner of the club.'Follow me and I will take you to this room where Jada West will meet you in.....'
    'Okay.... Bobby.....'
    The room was small but accommodating to Jada West's needs. Necole took a sit on the couch.
    After a good 15 mins., the door opens....
    'Sorry about that.... you know how fans are...' said Jada West... Jada sits across from Necole in a chair. The chair was close but not face to face.
    Necole was automatically physically attracted to this sister. But she did not know why. She just walked into the room. She never thought about sister's like that. Well maybe once or twice and maybe kissed 2 females in high school but never had a sensation like this...
    'So... Ms. Hardin?..' said Jada licking her lips.....
    'Yes... Ms. West....' asked Necole...
    Moving closer the chair to the couch where Necole was sitting at,
    'It's my eyes... I know.......' said Jada seductively now moving back....
    'So Ms. West, where was you born and why the music industry?" asked Jada in her best professional voice.....
    'Okay.... let's begin..............' replied Necole...........
     
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    u flowed a story so smoothly wow !!!
    i want more of dis pt.2 please !!
     
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    Hip-Hop Suga (Part 2)

    'I was born in Atlantic, Georgia. The Music Industry? Because I guess I love to sing and like giving the people what they want to hear......' said Jada after several moments of thinking.
    'Okay, Ms. West.... now for the record can you say that this industry is worth the while to be in if you are an artist just starting off?' asked Necole slowly. Jada was staring into Necole's eyes with a look of innocence.
    Jada now turning her head not knowing why the h*ll she was intrigued by this woman she barely knew...'Um.. I believe if a person believe wants to do something, then do it. Don't wait until it is too late to start.'
    'Okay.... Ms. West, thanks... That's all... I guess....' said Necole nowing getting up....
    'Please call me, Jada'
    'Then call me Necole'
    'Okay'
    'Okay'
    Now the presence being awkward.... Necole got up and went to the door. She turned around to look into the eyes of Jada. Now being face to face with each other...
    Necole said under her breath....'Yes, it's your eyes.....'
    'I thought so....' said Jada with a cute smile...
    Jada face moved into closer to Necole.
    They passionately kissed for a good 2 mins. when a knock was heard on the door.
    'Ms. West... you ready to go to the hotel?' asked personal assistant, Tobby Dobson... He was so nosy.... He was wondering if Jada had broken something.. .Jada always was getting into fights with reporters.
    'I will be out in a 15 mins........' said Jada out of breath....
    'Okay... Ms. West......'

    'Look.... I should be going anyway, ' said Necole now retrieving her portifolo bag form the floor where it had fell when Jada had pushed her aggressively with her mouth into the door...
    'I want to see you again but I have to go to New York tomorrow for a photo shoot and interviews......' said Jada to Necole now leaving...
    'Well... I am going to be in New York this weekend..Well for a few weeks for a story I need to finish up..... Maybe we could hook up then...' said Necole...
    'I got to tell you something.... I do have a girl..... But it's something about you...' said Jada.
    Necole heart was suddenly filled with a sadden feeling....
    'Okay..... sure...... But I don't do the whole cheating game....' said Necole,'Here's my business card...... Call me this weekend.... Maybe we can finish this interview.....'
    'Here's my number in return....... Remember, there's nothing wrong with physical attraction.. Sometimes you got to see where it takes you.....'
    Nodding her head, Necole said......'Thanks again.... Jada.....'

    Relieved to be in her car..... Necole thought to her self... 'What the h*ll have I got into?'
     
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    hip hop wow pop !
    what a story really enjoyed this
     
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    Wow...such a great story line. I would love to read more
     
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    You've captured my attention

    now I'll sit back, relax and read... as your story unfolds



    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:.
     
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    i just love it love it love it !!!!!
     
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    Again, again, again...

    You left me hanging with that other story "17 and something like it" but I see now that you are back and as floetic as ever. This is a beautifully written story. I like your ideas. Patiently awaiting Pt. 3...
     
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    Hip Hop Suga Continued................

    "Okay... Sweetie, are you sure that u got everything? You are safe, right, hunny?'said Necole's mom over the hotel's phone....
    'Mom, Please, quit, worrying.... I am fine... Trust me..... But Mom, I got to go... I am going out with some old friends here...... But I love you, Mommy..... Buh bye......' said Necole with a sigh....'
    'Love you, too....Necole.....'
    The line went dead.....

    Now being 11:30 p.m., it was time for Necole to leave to go the hottest club in New York, Da Hot Spot.... Necole did not know what to expect tonight. Every celebrity was in and out of Da Hot Spot.... Especially Jada, every Friday and Saturday night.....
    Now arriving in the parking lot, Necole noticed her friends. They waved her over so they could go inside. She knew all of them from Austin. They were journalists who moved to New York free lancing most of their work.
    As walking inside, the air was filled with so many scents. The scents captured Necole's senses.
    'RubberMan........' by T.I. played ova the air waves....
    'Hey, do u want to dance?' asked this thugged out stud to Necole..
    'Yeah......'
    Now playing over the speakers was.....'Attention.....Remix....'
    'Remix.... Remix' repeated over the speakers.....
    Necole and the girl danced like twenty mins....
    When Necole heared in her ear, 'Care if We danced......'
    She turned around to see that Jada was in her face and she noticed that she was grinding literally in the air with Jada....
    'I need it my life.....' rapped Juvie through the air....
    Jada now whispering in Necole's ear.... 'Like I need you in mine......'
    Necole slowly pulled away and put her finger over Jada's lips....
    Necole said quietly to Jada, 'Let's just live in the moment.......'
    They danced for two hours straight...Reporters taking pictures every 10 mins......

    Now sitting down.... 2:15 a.m. read Jada's cell phone....
    'I see that you came to New York and that you haven't called me yet?' said Jada across from Necole....
    'Yeah... something like that.... and I noticed that you still with your girl.... Your phone was ringing off the dayum chain when we was dancing.........' said Necole as sipping her long island ice tea......
    Giving Necole her best killer laugh...... 'Actually, I left her two days ago..... She just don't know how to let go.....'
    'I guess, you have that effect over the ladies, Ms. West......' replied Necole with a seductive smile....
    'Dayum....' said Jada to herself.....

    They talked for another half hour....
    'Look, I should be going..... I got a meeting with the ceo of Hitz Records in the morning...' said Necole to Jada who now was sitting right by her.
    'Yeah, Me..... too.... I have a photo shoot like at 11:00 this morning.....'
    Now going to the parking lot.... Necole felt a hand on her shoulder....
    'Come home with me......' said Jada seductively....
    'Let's play this game, Ms. West..... if you can keep up with my car on your motorcycle... You are welcomed to join me at my hotel.... and you have to promise.... to make it to your photo shoot.....'
    'I am game.....................' said Jada already on her motorcycle.....
    'Bet.... ' said Necole.....
    'And also I can promise you this..... you will love me.........'
     
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    You are killing 'em! Keep it coming... :bowdown:
     
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