Black Poetry : Hip Hop Memories

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~this poem isn't really about hip hop it's just a poem I wrote using song titles...see if you can find them :wink:~

    I stroll in the club like Ms.Fat Booty
    with my natural gang.
    Still walk past you ,wink and
    You Don't Know My Name.
    You get up from the table and walk me to the dance flo'
    My body swayin' and movin' like Maxine off
    Murder She Wrote.
    Whisper to you,"What's ya name?"
    You said,"Sam"
    The d.j. switched to Kanye with Jamie on Slow Jamz.
    Boys grab my friends say,"What ya' doin' tonight come roll wit' us fa' sho'."
    They nod to me and I say,"Anything Goes."
    12:00 chicken and pancakes at Waffle House we grab a plate.
    My friend goes home,I'm sleepy in my mind plays Floetry
    Getting Late.
    In your car we cruise down the street
    The phone rings my girl callin'.
    I let it ring cuz lookin' in your eyes I've Fallen.
    On 24th street I see a tall building must be your complex.
    Seated on your couch drinking Alize' we have Mind Sex.
    You whisper softly in my ear,"I Wanna."
    Tell me what you think and it sounds Heavenly.
    Spreading kisses from my neck to my thighs
    in my stomach they're fluttering,don't you feel the Butterflies?
    Reaching within' me causing me to shout out in pleasure.
    This feeling I do adore because like the lover I scream More and More!
    But Heaven Only Knows,cuz I don't understand
    How you can share such sweet Moments In Love with a man.
    While laying in your arms I felt a strong presence of security.
    Loving me fully said you'd always be Down For Me.
    I winded up in your bed the first night
    I don't know why.
    Guess I didn't want it to be Me, Myself, and I.
    Been six months times two
    I'm Still In Love With You.
    Thoughts of the lovin' you give me each and everyday come fall and spring.
    Pure happiness and joy
    Not a Sweet Misery.
    But,a lushious love Hip Hop Memory.

    ~this ain't true~:lol:
     
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    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :book: NOW THIS WAS REALY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!
    I LOVE HOW YOU FIT THAT INTO YOUR FLOW!!!!!!!!!!
    YOU GOINT TO HAVE TO SEND ME A COPY OF THIS, LOL!!!!!!!!
    KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!







    :wave:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    SensualReality

    "This ain't true." Yeah right. :mad: :D

    You're gonna make me call your parents and have them put you on punishment.

    Nice flow...I like...but that's a :nono:.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you (that's supposed to be ain't true) with us. :lol:

    :toast:
     
  4. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you kindly.....Loving them songs so I had to put them into a piece:wink:
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Monetary

    Shhhh you can't be tellin man.....:lol: THIS IS NOT TRUE FOREAL JUST FELT THE VIBE:wink:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way you blended those song titles in, this was very creatively done.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Watz...you make me write better :wink:
     
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