Black Poetry : Hindsight

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if we ever meet again

    will i be your friend

    this time

    or will my rhymes

    make you mad

    reminding you of how bad

    i was

    trying to create a buzz

    of friendship

    but instead, any chance of kinship

    disappeared

    when our "6 Days and 7 Nights" of romance were replaced by unverified

    fears

    that could have been clarified

    with a few more years

    of understanding



    love,

    howard
     
  2. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    howard... brotha, i felt this... been here before one... wish i could turn back the hands of time to see what could have been... but alas... it wasn't meant to be... just as this wasn't... anyhoo... i loved the drop poet... i felt it...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another very nice piece of work bruh !
     
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