Black Poetry : HIM>>>>

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 15, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My soul runs deep with him
    As he unfolds it
    Makes me cold but sends
    chills and gives thrills
    Release heat makes my heart beat…
    gives me visions when I think
    all is gone. Reaches in and helps
    me define and release..
    loosen my fears
    of love and tells my pain
    at times wrap in his love
    is all I need..Makes me laugh
    and makes me think.
    I am in love with him..
    He gives me joy..happiness even
    though he makes me
    cry..at times..I know he means no harm..
    But he is mine…
    Poetry Poetry Poetry
    My first love and always well be…
    See know one can take him away
    For he be mine in my terms with my pace..
    Using my wordz and my soundz..
    Poetry Poetry Poetry
    That be my main man….
    Ahhhhhh…yes it be….
    Poetry Poetry Poetry

    a blkangel thang...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed
    i too married
    her
    long ago my
    love
    of wordz
    she
    gave me hope
    and
    love'd me back
    i know what u mean
     
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    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel, Your poetic expression tells all infact it should be a musical piece for the value hits right at home, meaning the heart; better yet let's call this a MASTERPIECE.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My $$RICHN$$...yes indeed..
    the power it hold to unfold and let it be told..
    wordz twistin inspirin
    lovin and knowledge
    it hands out..soothes the soul release the pain..
    makes ya feel free...
    poetry thats my thang...glad you loved the flow....


    Ola..thanks for da love


    Zen Master_1..thank you is all i can say..i love to write twist wordz make new ones and just flow..glad you enjoyed this....means alot
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww, this just touches me. I know what ya mean - writing is my soulmate, fo sho.
     
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    You show your love everytime.

    Poetry is a beautiful thing, isn't it?

    Without it, I'd probably go crazy.

    This is a peace piece.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the support you have shown on this thread...
    much love :grouphug:

    it runs thru your soul..
    guides your hand
    and it works so well..
    reworded makin pharses..
    layin down just to make a point
    oh see how i love him
    poetry poetry poetry
    and everylasting love for me...
    no one can take the place of him....
    poetry poetry poetry
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hadn't penned my poetry for a while, I guess we had a temporary separation. But the words still flooded my mind, so it could never be permanent. Thanks for writing what is in a lot of our hearts.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname
    thank you for showin love on this...
    he gets lost at times and the words cant get place..
    but he always come around..so tru...
    its never permanent..you can believe that..

    :thanks: :rolling:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice tribute to poetry :bowdown:

    tyte!
    jh.