Black Poetry : Him

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 14, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 7, 2003
    Messages:
    1,410
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    n/a
    Location:
    in your atmosphere...
    Ratings:
    +1
    i licked up the shadow
    footprints that he left behind
    he comsumed every part
    of me,

    sent chills up and down
    my spine,
    i was his and he was mine,
    his words would stop time.

    i tasted the air around him
    sipped his words
    which dipped
    in my mental continum,

    his spirit weaved
    through me
    and when he walked
    the wind sang
    and the air called his
    name.

    i felt him constantly....



    this is from ya happy, happy, happy, poetic GODDESS, who has conquered writers block (thank God) hope u enjoy! ;) :D ;)
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2003
    Messages:
    9,146
    Likes Received:
    1,097
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +1,102
    Nice! and deeply Felt!
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 7, 2003
    Messages:
    1,410
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    n/a
    Location:
    in your atmosphere...
    Ratings:
    +1
    thank u purple, thanks for comin through,
    thanks for the love
    peace

    -story
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,752
    Likes Received:
    28
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Educational/Human Resources field
    Location:
    Chicago, IL
    Ratings:
    +28
    tyte flow:)
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 7, 2003
    Messages:
    1,410
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    n/a
    Location:
    in your atmosphere...
    Ratings:
    +1
    ahh thanks for droppin bye and takin tyme to read mi stuff.