Black Poetry : Him

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He is…
    My future king
    My future dreams
    The actor to my fantasies
    The only man that can get inside my panties

    He has…
    A smooth persona
    A smile that lights up my life
    Eyes with a color of its own
    A body structure that’s built of stones

    He…
    Tells me he loves me with all of his heart
    Shows me he loves me by holding down his part
    Calls me just to let me know where he’s going and who he’s going with
    Makes sure I’m doing alright and occasionally buys me gifts

    He…
    Takes his time, never rushes the clock
    Used to be a playa, but slowed down and stopped running the block
    Gets cuter and cuter when he gets mad at me
    Knows I test him a lot, but never raises a hand at me

    He knows…
    My spots, my nots, my likes, my dislikes, my passion
    When I want it, where I want it, how I want it just by my actions
    When I get mad, when to keep his space, when to invade it
    I am a strong woman that isn’t someone to be played with

    He caresses…
    My lips softly and stares deeply in my eyes
    My breasts then slowly works his way down to my thighs
    My kitty kat to make me crave and moan
    My back when I’m riding him and completely letting go

    He kisses…
    Me so deeply that I feel like I’m floating on air
    My shoulders while he is stripping me bare
    My thighs to tease me before he licks my spot
    Every space on my body knowing he’s the only one that can make me hot



    He…
    Holds me in his arms before and after we finish love making
    Loves to watch me sleep, after the breath taking-
    Experience
    Occasionally cooks for me, even though his chicken tastes like tar
    Never dogs me in front of his friends, even though he tries to act hard

    He…
    Isn’t perfect
    Makes me angry from time to time
    Annoys me sometimes
    Makes up for it to make life worth it

    He …
    Is just right
    Loves right
    Keeps me busting right
    Wouldn’t stay so long if he wasn’t right

    He…
    Is mine.
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is sooo good!!!!!! I love this....:):) :) :) :standing ovation: The Girl is :hot: :hot: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whomever he be is very lucky
    this was awesome wish it was me!
    tyte
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

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    awww thank u SwtT and $$Rich$$
     
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    this piece is real...
    you spit poetic fire on this one...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am still smiling from reading this one.
     
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    wow..I agree with the family this is wonderful
    Peace
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for reading and replying.
     
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    you forgot one line.....


    He is....
    the luckiest man on earth!

    you had me hooked from the first line.
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

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    awww thank u Alizentang, ur such a sweetheart