Black Poetry : Him

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  1. MsMercy

    MsMercy Member MEMBER

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    HIM

    “Hi Darling,” she says as she enters the entering.
    What she sees does not faze her as she sets on the cushion
    “This is Kration…my friend from out of town,” she hears.
    Kration? Can he kreate, animate or investigate…she wonders
    She didn’t really see him until he spoke
    “Zimbabwe,” he said nonchalantly…that was Him.
    She nods and sees no surprise or demise in his expression
    She tests him again to see if he stirs,
    “Switzerland…ahh,” he says in an educated voice…that was Him.
    ‘Wow, this one is unlike the sames, different from different,’ she thought to herself.
    This soul sported white and blue, but didn’t show it…
    Unsure of himself with doubts on his tongue
    She reassures him, there’s nothing wrong…really there wasn’t
    Wondering if he notices her interest in Him
    They sat close, yet far
    Touching during intermissions, but feeling inside
    The smile on his face led her to blush
    Blush came out as heat, almost darkening her brown skin
    He conversates with everyone but her after a while
    Leaving her with more than a hug, but a cuddle
    And walked out the door…
    That was Him.
    Tears were faked but genuinely felt as the two became separate again
    How could this be, a different disappearing before her eyes
    Once again stuck with the same
    Remaining with the remainder
    Craving to exhale, just one more time…’woooo’
    That felt good
    When will he be back again…
    Though she thinks of calling Him.
    HIM :heart: :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE...

    unique...
    in his persuasion
    Kration
    stepped lightly
    around same difference
    keeping his distance
    from "i wanna be like..."
    an internal flirt
    ...shy on the inside
    intense eyes
    pierced her soul
    as he turned to go
    his silence saying
    ...i love you.:), to
    HER

    HAVE MERCY.:)

    welcome to the playground.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mercy mercy me !!! welcome

    welcome to destee's playground of love
    welcome from da $$RICHNE$$ above
    welcome to open flow do ya do
    hit us wit mo! welcome within:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. MsMercy

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    Thank you much

    Hey everybody...

    thank y'all so much for hittin me back...didn't think i'd get so much feedback but this is excellent.

    merci a vous tous pour vos mots, je suis vraiment heureux que vous m'avez replier. vous etes tous excellent!
    i have yet to write a poem in french but i'll come back with more!

    Mercy... Me
    :D
    Oh yeah, i never did see HIM again, but fate always works things out for the best