Black Poetry : HILLS HAVE EYEZ

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Out lookin cross the maze
    mountian side eyez thy glaze
    dusty dew crumblin faze
    wildlife venture and plays

    Watching from near & far
    through da center hills bar
    clay mud bond as tar
    dancin moon sparklin star
    hills have eyez

    Up top mountain side
    where hope and grace reside
    from da grasp surely ride
    no long lingers or hide
    hills have eyez

    watching through da technicolor
    un-maskin every brother
    changing faces and it's cover
    forth da hills protect as a mother
    there's nothing like any other

    watchin me , us as a we
    hills eyez ova lookin da sea
    watchin da clouds above thee
    giving morrow something to see
    feelin da breeze of da air so free


    thy hills have eyez
    :uhoh:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang

    you took this to another level

    it made me feel like i was there man

    good $hiznit

    DSS
     
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    Hills are so vast and seem so indestructible, able to protect us, as they surround us. This was a comforting piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    you know so'ja eyez of da hills watching from afar
    in our inner cities ..............................thankz bruh

    Thank you sista watz forth da hills is comforting as they watch
     
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    very nice poet
    spitting true flow for real
    this was a hot asz drop

    watching through da technicolor
    un-maskin every brother
    changing faces and it's cover
    forth da hills protect as a mother
    there's nothing like any other
    ^^^
    my fav part
    8/10
    uno
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think someone like the movies too much. hill have eyez for you!!!!!!
     
  7. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh yes thy hills have eyez
    yet they can give no definate replies
    to life as they see it watching watching watching all things everyday
    viewing us as toys they watch us work they watch us play

    we are a mere distraction to hills eyez
    yet their life so remote under the hill what lies
    there is beauty there is grace
    though there aren't hills with eyez all over the place

    the land here is flat and alot less to see
    much less appealing to the powers that be
    how i would love to reside where the hills have eyez
    then i could lie on top and the hill can watch me watch blue skies

    much much love sweettee29
     
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    big thankz brother Tantrum for that man ......

    Thankz a million Nevar u know bout dem eyez too i see

    Oh yes sweettee29 surely u can relax in the mist of the hills
    as they watch from afar in comfort thank you sis.
     
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    I are they watchn' me....
    Very nice SCRIBE $$$RICH$$.
     
  10. sweettee29

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    ur welcome $$RICH$$ i love this piece and i had alot of fun writing a response


    much much love sweettee29
     
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