Quiet Poetry Lounge : High School

[shaz]

First love
first challenge
first choice

remembering when I set to pen the feelings
from deep within my heart and soul
the verse was not smooth
nor the rime on time
but the heart was true and the intentions clear
as I misspelled the words for your soul to here

in my heart and mind
next to you there was
no second choice
no plan B
it was win or go home
I won your heart for a season but never took you home

As amateurs in a sea of emotions we weathered the storm

The wind would blow and the ship was tossed
but the memories of You never lost
no matter the space or time you will always
be on my mind
loving you for the special
person you were, are and ever will be
my first passion /first love

 

[wildflower7]

i really liked how this flowed
and it was such a sweet sentiment...
hmm....
-7

 

[shaneak]

Awwwww

I 2nd that opinion. It was so sweet.... from reading your stuff...I bet you're a little angle...aren't ya!!!!

 

[poeticdelight]

Shazzy Shaz

this was tight!!!!!

may your ink continue to flow
from your mighty pen

pd

 

[shaz]

-7 It is good to here from you, thanks for the read.
Shaneak It's true I am some kind of angel (LOL)
Poeticdelight Thank you for showing me so much love, I am glad you liked it.

Thank You