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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Jun 15, 2001.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First love
    first challenge
    first choice

    remembering when I set to pen the feelings
    from deep within my heart and soul
    the verse was not smooth
    nor the rime on time
    but the heart was true and the intentions clear
    as I misspelled the words for your soul to here

    in my heart and mind
    next to you there was
    no second choice
    no plan B
    it was win or go home
    I won your heart for a season but never took you home

    As amateurs in a sea of emotions we weathered the storm

    The wind would blow and the ship was tossed
    but the memories of You never lost
    no matter the space or time you will always
    be on my mind
    loving you for the special
    person you were, are and ever will be
    my first passion /first love
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really liked how this flowed
    and it was such a sweet sentiment...
    hmm....
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  3. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww

    I 2nd that opinion. It was so sweet.... from reading your stuff...I bet you're a little angle...aren't ya!!!!
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    Shazzy Shaz

    this was tight!!!!!

    may your ink continue to flow
    from your mighty pen

    pd
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    -7 It is good to here from you, thanks for the read.
    Shaneak It's true I am some kind of angel (LOL)
    Poeticdelight Thank you for showing me so much love, I am glad you liked it.

    Thank You
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    IN MOTION

    YA FLOW IS SMOOTH SWEET AND COMPASSION
    GET YA GROOVE ON!!
    LOVIN DES........................................................$R
    :toast:
     
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