Black Poetry : Hide-N-Seek

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Sep 2, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I took my emotions from my sleeve
    where would they go?
    Would they be close enough to reach when needed?
    Not needed?

    From where would tears flow
    if not from my eyes?
    Wherelse but my face would they roll?

    How can I hide the good of me
    The bad of me
    The me in-between
    The me so clear in aim and direction
    The me sometime reluctant
    To see his reflection

    If I put anything away
    I may hide it to deep
    Too far from my soul
    Where I look for me

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    Magnificent! Scribe on poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!! FLOWPOET FLOW
    SAY DEM WORDZ
    FILL MY MENTAL WIT ALL U KNOW
    SAY IT BE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, WORK DEM KEYZ:toast: :D
     
  4. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HB

    This is "smoovely" displayed ....soul-deep.
    extra !

    one
    g-man
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE..this piece makes me think of a diamond..beautiful, sparkling, maybe not quite perfect and with many facets...put together, they make the beauty of a precious stone....

    K
     
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