Black Poetry : Hide and Seeking..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzMelanie2u2, Oct 26, 2004.

  1. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can love find you in all the right places? And if it can, then may it somehow find its way into all those empty spaces. That lies so deep within your soul. For this is the cause of your heart not being whole. For as the years have passed, and not one relationship has last, the continual disregard for the beauty of true romance. you’ve grown disheartened and yet you continually pant, for the waters of true love to flow within you.
    But will love find you in all the right places? Whether the answer be “yes” or
    “no”. your incessant desire is, “May I always be willing to wait no matter how it takes May love forever be with me where ever I go let it be a word ill always and forever know may it be an action ill always show and may it finally wrap me in its devoted arms and never let me go
    Can love find you in all the right places?
     
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    Hi :wave: this is a lovely poem
    Welcome to the family
    Please take the time to read the forum rules
    and view the other poet flows
    drop a post on their flows
    we all welcome our fellow poets thought on the poetry
    thats posted:)
    Poetic Etiquette
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    relax you are home:)
    much love to you...enjoying your flow
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love & sharing in unity
    welcome from above as i bless u some love

    tyte write nice flow continue u know ! welcome :hiya:
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    do hope you stay a while share a smile and consider on a membership
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    again welcome to the family sis. :juggle:
     
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    "Can love find you in all the right places?" I really liked the way you worked your words around this phrase. Smooth style.
     
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    Very Nice. The holes love leaves take many years to fill. Some holes remain in your heart and never will. But don't let that make you hide and not seeking. Love will come. Blood pressure peaking. Explosions wow, smiles and crowds wonder why. Some will say. You must be in Love! :hearts2: Yes love can find you no matter where you are. You can't run, you can't hide from love.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I don't know if it can (love that is)..but I do know I enjoyed your flow..
     
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    Welcome to destee.com
    likes your vibe very smooth
    yet i have no answer here
    put is was deep and creative
    writting...thanks for sharing.....

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    Peace
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  8. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearthis: ...Thank You so much for your warm welcome...! :hearts2:
     
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    Love... Love.... Love.... you're it!
     
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    makes you think can you find love in all the right places? thought provoking. NICE!!!!!!
     
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