Black Poetry : HIDDEN PAST: A poem by Tdogg

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  1. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    MY HIDDEN PAST

    Warm and calm gently I lay
    my mothers womb
    my world embraced
    Innocent and pure is the world I know
    but in this home I cannot grow.
    Unaware am I of the things
    yet to behold
    I burst into her world
    curious and bold.
    Embracing her image
    my first memory
    her glory her splendor
    my contentment and peace.
    In my life I now see
    the enchantment of her
    how dear it was to me.
    At the moment I am alone
    I know that I am not
    for it is you my hidden past
    that I have not forgot.
    my contentment and peace.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is nice
     
  3. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Angel for your reply and taking the time out to post reply your support is greatly appreciated. Signed Tdogg
     
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    this was really purrty I loved the way u painted ya pre made portrait :)
     
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    str8 smooth and beautiful u pose a greatness to this community
    happy u a part of us poetically
     
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    Nice flow here TDogg. Your never alone with memorys like these.
     
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    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful flow Tdogg
     
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