Black Poetry : hidden message...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, Jul 20, 2001.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many days
    I sit alone
    Staring out my window
    Seeing your reflection
    In the clouds
    Needing to
    Grasp the hand
    You extend to me
    Outpouring into my heart
    Unending joy....

    I wish I could
    Leave my heart
    On the wings of
    Virtue so you could
    Experience the
    Years of my
    Overwhelming joy for
    U

    look closely and you might see a secret....
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know she's missing you too D

    Beautiful poet

    *connect-the-dots*
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for reading and feeling me on this one...

    **poetic twin***
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Acrostic Beauty

    I enjoy reading acrostic poetry. You did a beautiful work on this one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MR...D

    IN SECRET OF LOVE U VOW IN HEART
    MISSING YO SWEETIE AND TRUELY SHE MISS
    U MORE FORTH THOU LOVETH ONE SHELL
    RETURN ..........MAN SHE LOVE U TOO JUST
    AS MUCH..........NICELY SPELLED OUT.:D
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahh D'Mo!!!!

    Written as only the poet of vividness can!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  7. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is hot!!!

    complexity across

    simplicity

    d
    o
    w
    n. tyte* d'mo


    sean.
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for your words...

    GQ, I'm glad to see you in the room again...Welcome home bro
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must agree, D-Mo

    she is most certainly missing and loving you, too!

    This is beautiful flo-etry my brutha! Beautiful!

    a
     
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