Black Poetry : HIDDEN BEAUTY

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She tries to hide what the corner of her
    eyes can not yet see
    but only a few people bet that there's
    something there to see
    at times she feels so decease when
    she has to reture back her recite of
    beauty products
    that she thought would work wonders
    but only caused more thunders
    many times she would be covered
    becuz her acne did not recovered
    so those were her excuses to hide
    and to show less smiles and more frowns
    this gurl self esteem was going down
    that she grew even more depressed
    cuz neva in her life she felt impressed
    but still i say hidden beauty is what it was
    a beauty so hidden, that every bad thought
    should have been forbidden
    instead of beauty being forgotten or lost

    in her eyes beauty was blind, she couldn't
    see beauty in her own reflection in the mirror
    that she neva thought of herself being
    close to perfection
    that she thought, only a blind man would give
    her affection
    so tears ran down her face like water falls
    becuz she neva was called out by a dude
    o how rude people wud act
    and o how sad she would react
    but all is fact, that she has hidden beauty
    that will one day be seen, if she eva stops
    acting mean

    her mother always told her to neva compare herself to anyone
    but she would alwayz reply and say life jus isn't fair
    that she gets so stress out and begins to loses hair

    and now she feels like," why try to spare a life such as hers"

    but things like rings and other fancy thangs
    people would neva bring to her
    but one day her phone will be full of rings
    from many guys
    and o how surprise she will be
    to say that i had all this beauty hidding inside of me!


    dedicated to the ones who have acne and think that they are ugly,
    jus know that you are a catapiler waiting to turn into a butterfly
    copywrite (c)

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I found beauty to be skin deep uncovered
    what u see outside is the shell beauty is within
    i feel ya on this drop.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya again my bratha rich aka rich in rhymes
    im glad u was feelin that
    i mean not dat many brathas & sistas kno or think
    beauty is skin deep, im jus glad u one of the guys that think that


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    tru dat , we have to look beyond the outter view with
    deeper vision of what's inside this why a face no matter
    what he/she look like has nothing on the heart

    Beauty is skin deep within ..
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    iight bratha rich i feel ya
    i mean me as a person is tryin 2 help people wit low self esteem


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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i really like how you put it down on this one ga very deep and good positive meaning behind this. flo on poet.:welldone:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How sweet:flowers:
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u again nevar and cursed heart for the visit and for showin a sistah sum mo luv...lol


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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those words are much needed in our community where we focus on outside beauty and try to look like video girls insted accepting and being ourseves.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya for showin me sum luv choclatangel
    im glad u was feelin it
    and yes u r rite i guess in most human eyes true beauty is blind



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