Quiet Poetry Lounge : Hey You

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***Inspired by Floetry's Song "Hey You."

    Today
    I stood outside in the
    rain in an attempt
    to dissolve away
    or
    just disappear or just
    be gone,
    be back or be just.
    I can't raise my eyes to anything
    but blurry visions of you.
    Formless silhouettes of your form and
    I resurface in my conscious to whispered echoes of
    "Hey You,
    It wasn't in the plans for me to leave.
    I know I hurt you, but I’ll try to come
    back real soon, one day.
    I don't want you to be alone and
    and I can't live without you."
    I can't seem to recall
    if I left you behind when we started out,
    or was it you?
    At one time it seemed like
    time was our best friend
    and now I feel the chill of his cold shoulder.
    I walk on streets of
    distant memories and tear drops
    counting the days until you may
    return.
    I try to resign myself to your
    absence but I’m
    still caught with the whispers of
    "Hey you"
    I walk and find myself looking over my
    shoulder thinking I heard your footsteps,
    but I’m only faced with a downpour of my
    own memories.
    What could have happened?
    I question myself and try to see
    the point, but I only see the pain
    my dreams cry when their slain and
    I re-enter this world to vague murmurings of
    "Hey You,
    It wasn't in the plans for me to leave.
    I know I hurt you, but I’ll try to come
    back real soon, one day.
    I don't want you to be alone and
    and I can't live without you."
    The voices echo and
    I push away the pain and wait for
    that one day.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
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    the visional maze of this was awesomely tyte
    i felt it and heard the tunes of lyrics clashing
    flow on
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for the love brotha love. Be blessed, love down below for the moment, thats whassup.
    ~Dior
     
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    "Heeeey you,I'm sorry that I have to leave I'll try to come back.".......That is my song lol loving this piece brother
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you babygirl. That is my jam as well!!!!!!!!!!!!!Love down below for the moment, thats whassup.
    ~Dior
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The visions you pose here, especially that of the rain, reveals the flame.
     
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    WOW! Wow, I've been here. This piece haunts me, it is wonderful. Peace to you my friend.
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again Gemp you are truly a blessing. Thank you for your love. God bless.
    In a minute.
     
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    When did you step into my mind? how did you know the words I once said?wow ...I sometimes live it over. this touched my heart and soul...can I relate to it? ...yes, very well.
    This is no doubt...an awesome piece...thanks for sharing.