Black Poetry : HEY YOU

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 16, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey MY $$MR.RICHNESS$$
    We did promise ….
    Ya made the challenge…

    I am sorry I have to go here just one more time….
    So excuse me please….

    I look in ya eyez and saw dat smile…
    Got excited all ova again…
    INDEED!!!!
    your the lova man..
    Doin yo thang…
    I missed the action..
    So I had to take another
    Flight
    Of dis here
    Lovin extreme bliss
    Listen….coz I have ta tell ya…..

    I move my hips in a erotic twist
    Grip and laid ya out….
    Ya listenin….
    Yo feet did DAT curl…
    And ya SCReam…
    See….ya wasn’t listen….
    I warn ya the last time….
    tryin ta do what
    grown folks do…
    huggin
    kissin
    ahhhhh..now
    WATCH OUT!!!
    ya work it like ya had
    a job to do…
    and the pay was of
    erotic playful
    mist….
    put dis on anything..
    Just ta show ya…
    Da faze ya started din
    Place ya in a world of MAZE…
    Now I know ya know what
    I am tryin ta tell ya…

    See I din please ya
    Took ya on a flight of ur
    Own Personal TASTE….
    Doing
    all
    da
    thangs
    grown
    folks
    do..
    just tryin ta tell ya

    :toast:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmm....very nice....
     
  3. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang gurl.........this is flamin hot. I love this piece.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ride the wave
    as ya body crave
    i am the storm
    in ya rain
    the mix of ya bliss
    my magical touch
    is da love to clutch
    so ride
    float on the cloud
    of my love
    and know da blaze
    of rapture
    see it's me tryin
    to tell ya
    inside my wallz
    my love is
    strong
    da kind that make
    u moan
    see
    i
    been
    tryin
    to tell
    ya dis
    u been captured
    in the maze
    that faze u
    to my beckon
    of
    call
    indeed
    i'm RAWWWWW!!
    DONE TOLD YA .....
     
  5. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes ya drop a….
    on me…
    yes indeed
    I am in dis maze….
    Floatin on clouds…
    Tryin to ta….

    Releasing from within…
    Dis here rapture was only
    the first part
    a new beginnin…
    dats what was said…
    now its here…
    ya got me……
    Yes indeed
    I know…
    I am your….
    Baby
    Takin it down low
    and bring it back ta you….
    Move in swirls makin ya sweat…
    Now ya know that I
    am the one for ya….
    Lovin….
    Playin
    Kissin and
    Huggin
    Just like grown folks do..
    Now I guess I am grown…
    You din told me…
    I didn’t listen….
    I been captured by thee Man…
    Came ta….
    Come feel my richness….
    ya told me but I didn’t..…
    I have to admit......
    The bliss…..
    The compassion…
    the fire was......
    Yes it was…
    Now ya know
    Just tryin ta tell ya….