Black Poetry : hey u

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Nov 28, 2001.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey u
    on the other end of this computer screen
    can u feel me in my flo
    am i being seen
    can u peep thru all the 1's and 0's that
    make up my prose
    can u see my nose with a webcam
    ****
    my computer's hardrive is jammed with spam
    so i can't see u but i wonder
    if u feel me in mywordz as my
    verbs joinphrases with each keystroke
    does my point come across to u as
    crazy? my style lackadazy seen in my diction
    i can't tell what's true or fiction within
    my lines
    so let me know if u feel my rhymes?
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like it a lot.
    Say what you feel sistah
    It's the best way to
    Feeel~ ya
    Thanks for the read
    Yo sis,
    Desert Storm
     
  3. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aye

    storm.....
    no disrepect, but i'm a dude shawty.
    thanx for the preciation tho'
    and keep reading me.
    pleeeeeeeease.
    hi-wa
     
  4. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aye,...

    check pt. 2 for the reply
    and see if u can put them
    to

    ge

    th

    er.
     
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    emax Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin' your words man, keep droppin'

    One
     
  6. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mos Def

    Feelin it fa sho'

    Reas