Black Poetry : Hey There Poetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Oct 20, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey There Poetry

    Cool and refreshing you are to me
    Those intimate twist of verbs and nouns
    That makes my river flow with out bounds

    Breaking loose that intense feeling
    Causing strength and inner healing
    Moonlight whispers come from you
    Stimulate pleasure, in the midnight blue

    Speaking softly of the stars
    Caressing me with your breathtaking charm
    Making me feel that I am the one
    As the river flow and run

    You are so special yes you are
    From you I feel warmth release and love
    You take me from an ordinary day
    And bless me with much to say

    You are a welcome a cool delight
    Together we venture to magnificent height
    So wonderful to have you in my life
    As we wine and dine with words
    Into the night
    "Hey There Poetry" :heart:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful piece, made me emit a deep sigh, it had a comfortable feel to it Blue. Flow on.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just beautifully spoken to the mindset of poetry
    love this piece or art how it mellows me out
     
  4. Poetrymama

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    re:Hey

    Blue, this is a very,very lovely poem. Makes a soul feel peaceful.
    Well-done.
     
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    tight and smooth very easy to read
    as the cool blue water flow..
    this took me
    love your flows...Angel
     
  6. lilcherry76

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    this poem flowed as you flowed.......i was really into this one....it made me sit back and say "hmmm--now ain't that something-hhhmmmmm......." :toast:
     
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    l like the positive light your brought to poetry...

    :coffee:
     
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    sweet poetry is a blessing.....
    makes me say hey too....glad your back sista blue....:)
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. Bluewater

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    hi Sister watzinaname :) smiling so happy you like my flow, and you could feel the comfort...thank you so much for the love :heart:

    hi Brother $$RICH$$. :) ah wow thank you so much ...smiling more.ahhhhh yes thank you for the love :heart:

    hi Poetrymama :) thank you so much, i'm happy you felt the peace in my peace..thank you so much for the love :heart:

    hi Sisiter mzblkangel..:) yeah i am feeling myself coming back into the flow of the flow..thank you so much sis for the love:heart:

    hi lilcherry76 :) *laughing* yeah now that is how i felt when it release..*smiling more* thank you so much lilcherry for the love :heart:

    hi Brother j'hiah :) ah yes..feeling only good things indeed better then yesterday...LOL///thank you so much for the love :heart:

    hi Warrior Brother Khasm13 :) thank you for the love on my flow and the welcome back...yeah ..poerty so so cool...:heart:

    FEELING NOTHING BUT LOVE

    Thank you all so much for the love :hearts2:

    Blue
     
  10. heartofantiger

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    :bowdown: nothing like thew sweet wisper of poetry. :bowdown:
     
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