Black Poetry : ...hey there baby you look how i feel...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Aug 12, 2004.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is just a song i felt like writing from an experience a few weeks ago and i and decided to post it....
    enjoy...

    verse 1:

    hey there baby you look how i feel yeah
    drives me crazy to see all your tears yeah
    did she leave you alone when you gave your whole heart, body and soul
    never thought it would come to this baby
    don't think of doin' nothin' crazy

    hey there baby tell me how you feel yeah
    does it drive you crazy to know she don't feel yeah
    after years of that love when you gave your everything and more, you know
    it just don't seem right does it baby?
    she just can't get away from you head and yeah


    chorus:

    i know how it feels to be in pain baby
    i know how it feels to be down in pain baby
    i know how it feels when tears don't cover pain
    baby i know how it feels
    the hurt is so real


    verse 2:

    and i know you but i know that we've got
    the same problems and comforts me yeah
    and i'm guessin by how your lookin', you can't figure out why she harmed you
    i wanna take our pain and throw it all away
    burn it up, throw the ashes away
    oh yeah

    (Chorus)


    Bridge:

    i know that its pain and it hurts and you strain
    i know that you wanna just give it all away
    just take it burn it til you feel you gained
    hey there baby we've got the same pain

    (Chorus)

    fades out...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow1 very nicely done sang sistah sang
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a song that many can feel within, even though it is painful, it happens. Keep flowing like you do.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So good to read you again, sister. This is bomb.
     
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    I always did love your songs!
    I really wish that you would
    sing one in chat!

    Beautiful song Sis!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww thanks....
     
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    Do your thang poet/floetis artist
    Much love my Sista
     
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