Black Poetry : Hey Lady

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hey lady
    I know ya beauty
    my heart now sought
    ya inner beings
    my journey in route

    I've seen ya glamor
    glist of deep gleam
    tender stride
    da sway to my dream
    it da rapture i now fien

    I listen to da essence of u
    and the orbs of ya existance
    that call me under submission
    my love so confess in session
    from da vision of compassion
    where i wish to give my affection

    silently whispering belove
    as my heart limp out to protect
    every sight of u and wrap you
    in da mist of my arms
    i know you lady and seen you
    felt the depth of you
    i found my spirit visiting you
    to watch ova u in your slumber

    lady if u only knew me .........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was deeply touching. Perhaps instinctually she knows you too, because everytime your spirit visited her, she knew, and welcomed you home. Whew...
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words are beautful, so I'm sure the lady feels a beautiful soul :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz may da doors swing open ....

    thankz wisdom7 i hope it reach her heart in time....
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, this is so pretty.
     
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    thankz a million sweet baby face..........
     
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    Rich, you are such a unique individual and I am sure she know.
     
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    poetrymama once she become of me then one will know
    thankz a million sista for the visit .................................
     
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    Wow!!! that was nice!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey now you know I likes this one!!!!! I need say no more on this...just keep it coming just like that

    Peace
    Angel
     
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