Black Poetry : hey friend

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Aug 16, 2004.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mom
    I sense the time when I
    attached to you
    did move
    understanding now, with energy inside
    riding my waves
    and dancing...
    feeling the joy - as you did me
    even with the highs and lows
    which you called pain
    i fly......
    I
    rooted to your moods and feelings
    and
    your mothers,
    mothers,
    mothers,
    thighs....
    riding high..
    blessed to tend the soil
    and make it
    rich
    within
    Hey Friend
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    like how u did this sistah hey friend !
    very nice
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What I felt here was a connection, a feminine connection, from one generation to another, throughout the years. Very warm piece deepy.
     
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    i enjoyed this scribe...
    very warm and welcoming
    thank you for sharing
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thanks you three..above me
    femine it is watz
    glad twas warm for you two
    and welcoming..hey..
    angel,$rich,watz...
    i appreciate the props
     
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    Whoa, this is deep. Yet simple and elegant.
     
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    I've always found it amazing
    how deeply connected women...
    mothers and daughters can be
    and even when they're apart
    physically...there is always
    something intrinsic happening
    in the spirit...

    Love the way you pull me
    to new levels of consciousness
    through your poetry!
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was such a sweet, sweet flow Deepy! Nicely done
     
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    hey friend this take me somewhere
    i had to revisit it coz we all should be
    what u pose.........thank u for da wake up!
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    gempis i appreciate the support / response
    angelicsage...the bond between women is so deep...so linked eternally to mother nature...even with the tensions/abandonment/lack of love/whatever...it still flows...like the ocean..glad it took you somewhere.
    jazzymoonchild....thanks sweetie
    and brother $rich glad you came back to feel what i know my mother was/is - a friend.....
     
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