Black Poetry : Hey Blak

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Destee, May 24, 2001.

  1. Destee

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    so many things come to mind
    as i begin to write this flow
    i'm sure you already know
    that everything i was gonna say
    the other poets got in my way
    all in my thoughts stealing my rhymes
    so i'll just say what comes to mind ...

    hey Blak, remember that time
    you thought someone was being unkind
    came to their aid so they'd not feel the pain
    of a poetry drive-by leaving it slain
    hey Blak, remember when we lived in the shelter
    packed in like sardines, starting to swelter
    GQ complaining 'bout the cots were too hard
    Alyce w/her O2 tank constantly checking its cord
    wow it seems like we've been friends our whole life
    hey Blak, are you married, do you have a wife?
    you're the kind a brother make a sister want to know
    don't mean to be nozey or nuth'n doe ...
    hey Blak, i'm so glad you'll still be our moderator
    leaves me hope that i'll see you sooner than later
    guess a gurl can't ask for much more than this
    God has blessed and answered my wish

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awweee Destee

    I like it...i like it alot!:)

    :heart: Afri
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, destee, I remember all the times and i thank you for them. you are amazing. thank you for the scribe.

    one love, blak
     
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