Black Poetry : Hesitant

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  1. NikkiRenee

    NikkiRenee going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    My daily personality reacts to how I act
    My act actually connection tentative my fact
    To my personality of coming across today
    What I'm trying to say
    I am what I am
    I am is naturally mindful of being one automatically surrounded w/ learned personal phenomenons
    Through this act of living
    Not 4 ever alive
    But a planned substantial point in time
    U and I become us being the chime
    My today is Afrocentric where the act is being done
    With I am of the Son
    Portray me as been there personally & act upon that once again
    My personality of today requires this tentative connection all over again with the Sun.
     
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    wow this was off the hook very good vocab you a sista layin git down
     
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    through this act of living, we learn. sometimes, what we learn is phenomenal.

    a profound reconnection with the ONE.
     
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    Happy you enjoyed reading my script.
     
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    Some things always stay the same just a little rotations of natural travel so to speak.
    Beginnings(beings)come as "one" phase!
     
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    Depends on

    Depending on the temperature of the day
    Rather the sweat comes out the palms
    The temp being less cold
    More to let go
    What's been stuck up
    Is now coming out
    Neutrally agreed upon
    To have that depends on
    The opponent
    When wanting to know the play
    Done in acts of course
    The environment needing to be off the chain for personalities to be driven
    On a warmer path of
    A fist becoming power driven out from within deepened.