Black Poetry : ...He's My ANGEL...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From my first tear you were there for me
    To my stroke face and to grieve with me
    Your subtle touch encouraged me to heal
    Your simple kiss restores me so real
    From a hug I’m emotionally complete
    No other being can fulfill my every need
    You’re a necessity, I’m so addicted
    Just make me laugh to uncloud sickness
    You’ll never know when my last tear may be
    You’ll never know if we’ll forever be free
    But you’re still standing right by my side
    Making sure I’m here ‘til the end of time
    I have hundreds of motivations to love you
    Could never count all the reasons that do
    You are the first, last, the future and past
    You give me love to unconditionally last
    You are my lover, my dream always asked
    Nothing superficial about it, nothing sad
    I never dreamed I’d be in love in this way, no
    You’re my baby, my darlin, my eternal ANGEL…
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that was so beautiful and sweet
    ya ANGEL ova ya alwayz .....
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes he is gurl...sing it from the top of the mountain..:) nice flow:)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks mzblk, rich, and swtt:)
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    anymore comments?
     
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    islander Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was so beautiful.
     
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    i loved this....beautifully said....j
     
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    see...this is true love! both of you are blessed because you have each other...much love to both of you
     
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    wow.....this was so deeply felt, being in love like this is to be cherished
    and I see that you do...
    absolutely beautiful
     
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