Poetry Critiques : He's good to me but not for me

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord have mercy this man has lost his mind
    He all up in the house showing his natural behind
    But I ain’t going no where cause good men hard to find

    Somehow I ran into his fist the other night
    When he came home and the house wasn’t right
    But girl he bought me some new kicks that was so tight

    And last week he threw me into a wall
    Because when I was running late I didn’t call
    But he took me shopping the next day at the mall

    I know he’s not much to claim
    And I should of probably been left him
    But without him my future looks so bleak and dim

    You see I’m not a dime piece or nothing
    And just having him make me feel like something
    Besides he helps me with the kid and pays everything

    :garbage: :luvv:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt write
    nice mixture of emotions
     
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