Black Poetry : He's going to regret

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miss-no-love, Jan 4, 2005.

  1. miss-no-love

    miss-no-love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What up yall, I'm 17 yrs old and this is my first time writing a poem. Tell me what yall think.


    you said I aint s*** but you were the one who cheated on me
    you put yo d*** in some b**** ***** now you tellin me she might be pregnant with yo baby
    it's funny cause when you told me I was like ****! why would you do that to me
    but s*** I forgot how ****** can be
    they can make you think they luv you when they don't give a f*** about you
    they can make you feel like your on top of the world but the whole time they just in it to f*** you
    they can give you anything you want but at the end you still looking like the fool
    well, **** I can say that you had me fooled
    cause when you said I was wifey I believed that ****
    u see, when u was ******* around with them other chicks I didn't give a f***
    them bit**** was gonna fell like they ran out on their luck
    you said didn't know b**** come before me
    you said you will always love me unconditionally
    but all of that **** you said was just fu***** lies
    it's such a shame
    cause I used to look at chicks funny
    when they even said your fu***** name
    you were the type my mother told me about
    you were the type my father warned me about
    but I didn't want to hear what people was sayin'
    I just didn't care
    you said people was jealous of the "love" we shared
    and I understand you needed your needs
    but I couldn't be the one at risk of getting an STD
    you see, I realize a ***** gonna be a ***** regardless
    how he treat ya
    but at the end he's going to realize how much he really needed ya!


    Please tell me what yall think! this came from the heart
     
  2. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice poem. But, most of the words were cut out, because curse words are prevented from being seen on Destee. theres a post on here if you wanna read it I still liked it tho. That's good for a first poem!
     
  3. miss-no-love

    miss-no-love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks! $$RICH$$ what do you think?
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this piece some love

    nice flow in all keep dropping and sharing upon the family
    do when time permit you to visit our (POETIC ETIQUETTE RULES)
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896

    we have a list of banned words that's not allowed within our home
    keeping it safe and clean yet expressing self ...thankz for sharing
    looking to read more of u soon again welcome within
     
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