Black Poetry : he's a star and she has issues (for the accused and the guilty)

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  1. SweetBlack

    SweetBlack Member MEMBER

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    so they enter this room
    dimly lit.
    and they sit.
    he motions her to
    remove his shirt.
    she thinks,
    "this won't hurt".
    he's leary for
    his "rep" is at stake
    when she says "no"
    he says its too late.
    he's got a wife
    she has rough life
    with a past that
    leads to obvious
    wounds
    and still she missed
    the thrill
    who will believe me?
    she's telling a lie.
    she said yes, he
    found guilt when he didn't
    deny.
    but he's a star and
    she has issues.
    they will look in disbelief
    while she asking for tissue.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very tyte piece

    they will look in disbelief
    while she asking for tissue

    that right their was it ....let ya pen speak on !
     
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    thanks, Rich.
    this has been on my mind for weeks....gotta let dem loads off.
     
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    well felt too let it off and release then relax back for the quiet
    moment of da day ....most welcome poet !
     
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    SweetBlack, feelin' you on this also. Welcome!
     
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