Black Poetry : HERricane(sunk our friendship)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    -a dedication to him-I'll truly miss- (a tanka series)


    we said before she
    "our friendship is forever"
    sailed high and low tides
    each kept the other afloat
    until he met HERricane

    first... she received me
    upto her misconception
    we're much more than friends
    a platonic connection
    since the very beginning

    calm before the storm
    alerts bad weatHER ahead
    his words cut soul deep
    "goodbye indefinitely"
    HERricane sunk our friendship



    feelin'blue souldeep!
    Coco :crying:

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    I liked the creativity in this painful flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the chapter of pain u scribe here i so felt
    sistah sometime it sink faster then it sail
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname, thanks for feelin' my pain

    $$RICH$$ you are so right...
    what took years to build...
    took what seemed like minutes to sink.

    the pain in my heart
    and the sadness in my soul
    warns it is the end and pushes
    me to move on, but hope tells
    me to wait.. time will change minds
    and our friendship will be again


    Coco :crying:
     
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    very well done
    likes this
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    tight flow

    I'm sorry, momma. This is such a painful situation. Thinkin of you.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel... I'm pleased you enjoyed the write.

    gempis... thanks for your comforting words.

    madd love sistahs :)



    Coco :heart:
     
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    Sister...*sigh*..*whew*

    (First)...your writing is always so "Brilliant"...

    particularly the play on words in this one...

    but most of all the dilemma...*sigh*

    a familiar road...indeed...as your words

    evoke...soul tears... :crying:

    Flow on Sister...I'm feeling it
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage

    I've accepted what is to be
    and I'm thankful for what was
    and I'll cheerish the memories
    now I'm feelin' betta and with
    more time I will feel even betta...



    thanks for the sistahly love :)
    Coco :heart:
     
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