Black Poetry : here

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Aug 21, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    why am i thinking
    if i don't call u
    somehow u will
    disappear?

    what makes me think
    this longing for connection
    is something i need
    from u , my dear?

    and if i have memories
    that's all they remain
    a wrenchin in my torso
    makes me hate them again

    like others before
    who i i have seen leave
    thinking they'd have
    a better life without me?

    so far from the truth
    and the same applies to you
    cause out of all i fear
    you'll still be here.

    here, the very same place
    u left me
    here,
    where i felt my chest cave in
    here, where smiles turned to frowns
    here, where u played games with my mind
    here, the place u'll spend your life
    to find....
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well felted scribe More
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sistah i felt this one
    very very nice
     
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    very emotive flow!
    enjoyed...
     
  5. triniti424

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    me like it too :) lol
    I know the feeling all too well :)
     
  6. the_story

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    dang, i felt this one deep gurlfriend, love ya flows,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice PEACE.... deja VU!!!! whoooooooo... shoot!... I BEEN "HERE" too... well put (snaps).
     
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    :angel1: THANK YALL
     
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