Quiet Poetry Lounge : HERE SHE COME....u bring me to my knees!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Dec 14, 2008.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    How i reveal in you essence
    as i lavish da thoughts
    when i dash inside ya mental mind

    U display refreshment upon my lips
    I dance in your moment of tyme
    my soul is flattered & astonishing

    When i embrace your idealism i fine comfort
    whereas ya wisdomize view is upspring
    my heart become exquisitely yours

    for i found you to be a ravishly devine
    it is to be melancholy and undeniable
    when u romanticly romance my mind

    Every time you come , you bring wealth
    and raw rare jems upon me and i melt
    into a cascading slumber

    I so would give up the world
    for the worthiness of ya touch
    and to grasp your legs , so endearing

    At your feet we dance radiantly free
    fancy and sweet as i inhale all of you
    to my knees i am

    Take me , i'm at your will and love
    for if caring was a crime i would be lock away
    shell i be your companion or your love slave
    for will you desire me , when your passion is satisfied

    Forth you art da woman of morrow whom must be sought
    and dreamt of in ye' eyez a sparkle of spoken love which
    time does not quench this throws me into a devine ecstasy
    you leave me breathless at my own exsitance.


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  2. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A loving symphony of romantic strings....played upon the harp of your heart. Pure and transparent.

    I especially enjoyed these lines here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz it was something that cross my mind today or was it that i was thinking about something.....
    this what was mended upon da canvas ....Thankz for the visit within me
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see ya Brother.. I have spent and will spend time.

    " to my knees i am "

    Just to cherish the love.

    Another Great drop $$RICH$$
    luving it!
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I agree....

    If man and woman would just humble themselves before one another...how simple love would be....

    we have so many defense mechanisms up....and so much pride to withhold...that it plays inteference to the love being born....slowly sailing away...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz HODEE......i find myself openly yet graceful to be in the light of her for her will
    and means is beyond compare i bow in her honor ....

    Yes sweet apple*pie .....If only we could see pass defenses and humble selves to thy mates/lovers/ friendz and new beginings it would bring a closer change to love freely


    Y'all words mean a lot thank you both as i pounder thoughts within me.
     
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    Lovely post here Rich, Keep flowing for loves sake poet...
     
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    Surely i will try my best as i reach out to that special someone .......Thankz bruh
     
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