Black Poetry : Here Kitty Kitty...nice kitty

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GOT YOU!



    Take THAT!
    You dirty ol’ putty tat
    Mangy, messed up, faced scratched
    Ally Cat

    Been fightin’ wit wolves and expect me
    To nurture that
    Feed you from a bottle, warm milk
    But you neva holla back

    Get out outta my house!! Cuz you stink
    And I can’t be havin that,
    Thinkin you the Heathcliff of the hood
    Like Im supposed to be sittin back
    While you trickin and treatin, hella naw!
    You gots the wrong Persian jack
    You can start thinking of me
    as that prissy white fluffy cat

    Getting all high sidity
    Finally comfortable with all this pretty
    Finally comfortable in this body
    Finally comfortable without you with me.
    So peace out pissy!
    Don’t meow when you miss me
    Ima prance my toes right pass you
    Into the arms of my new kissy!

    A real Cat…coyly knows how to handle dat
    While you chasin gutter rats
    I’ll b suckin lobster backs

    Sluuurp!

    Taste real good.

    And Compliments my wine, as it should
    Compliments the new me
    And the new me is doing good
    So peace be with you
    And all the fishbones your searchin through
    I hope u find that one wish bone,
    That’ll talk some sense into u

    But as for me?
    I done moved up like George and Weezy
    Im doing real good now
    So dont meow when you miss me.



    And get your @ss off my porch. :smokin:



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  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word play off the hook. I enjoyed this in your face, dismissing the kitty scribe, now scat cat! ^5
     
  3. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was TIGHT!!!!!! I was smiling and laughing and chuckling! Excellent word play and use of metaphors! Truly one of the best.....

    My favorite lines:

    Because the reality is it's never about what anyone else thinks about you, only about how you feel about YOU! And when you can love and see the beauty in you then can't nobody do anything to change that and you will settle for nothing less than the BEST! Great job Sis!

    *still laughing*
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love it,love it!:welldone:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    badd putty cat...


    Oh my dayum that there is crisp! Put it there, high paw!

    Thanks for sharing this cleverly play on words masterpiece!


    Feelinitsouldeep!
    Coco
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    here kitty kitty , here kitty kitty whewwwww Red Alert
     
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    Smh.....

    Boy he is really going to miss his meow mix..hhahahah
    That was tight...

    Lilpea..
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    bad kitty cat

    bad kitty cat

    if that kitty come round here the china man gonna chop him up

    and make chicken fried rice you know the lunch special wit da egg roll

    lol

    seriously

    i felt the fire

    and that fact you're fed up wit the bullcrap

    peace
     
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    and i thought we were being called to dinner...

    ...had me ready to sip fine wine from da...

    OH...my bad.

    kitty done messed up, again.

    NICE.
     
  10. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea, I'm looking for a *fly* cat.......Know how ta handle dat!!



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