Black Poetry : Here is what he says he feels

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  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was written by close friend of mine


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    To think of you sometimes is to lose myself ...
    to touch you, to leave my body ...
    an eerie experience
    i am inside you
    i am part of you ...
    will you have my baby?
    no ... wrong
    can i have your baby ?
    a walk into nature .. me and you ..
    a flowing river ..wind rushing through the blades of grass on a hot summers day
    silence
    and i touch you
    beads of sweat carressing your face
    oh how i want you
    define want
    define need
    what do i feel now ? what is it ?
    cuz i sure cant do without you, cant do without this feeling that you bring
    to talk .. to hear your voice ...
    joy , flames passion all erupt
    lemme stop
    you make me happy
    zee
     
  2. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please relay my kudos to Poetess Zee, DaFlavaFul. :thanks:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice and well written
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Love ain't a bad thing

    feeling the depth here poet

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