The Front Porch : Here is a poem I wrote

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  1. keyame

    keyame New Member MEMBER

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    Let Me Take It Away From You

    They made you cry
    I dried your tears
    They said you were blind
    I gave you eyes to see

    They hurt your feelings
    I gave you love renewed
    They made you feel dirty
    I made you as white as snow

    They told you of your faults
    I erased each one of them away
    Your parents were taken from you
    I became more than just your comforter

    You felt you needed to hide from your enemies
    Instead I made them your footstool
    Everything you felt was impossible
    I took away from you and gave you life anew
     
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    Beautiful Peace Brother! :grouphug:

    Thanks for Sharing!

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    Yvw....ty for the luv
     
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