Black Poetry : HERE I AM

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Here I am ... proud and loud
    Here I am ... black and white
    Here I am ... wrong and right
    Here I am...
    Angry... and we gon fight.

    Here I am ... oppressed and risen
    Here I am ... raped and given
    Here I am ... feel dead but still livin

    Angry... **** your religion

    Here I am ... rich and poor
    Here I am ... innocent and whore
    Here I am ... gettin and still want more

    Angry ... knockin so open the door!

    Here I am ... know who I am
    Here I am ... don't like me I don't give a ****
    Here I am ... something you will never understand...

    pleasantly woman.......

    Angry .... will take my lumps like a man

    Ask God to bless me....
    Ask fools not to test me...
    Ask corrupt not to sweat me...
    Ask my people to help protect me....

    Angry ... but the devil still won't get me!!!

    Here I am......... Catch me if you can!
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Miss Lady, this is tight!!! I can definitely relate in so many ways!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Here i am
    there u be
    in my arm
    safely as we
    caught !!!

    this was indeed tight and i can relate to every faze and way that seen us in a mist
    of some twisted feeling or effect that will make us at any time move this way or that
    way ......i feel u and ya caught !
    now relax
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The main feeling I felt from this piece, was strength. Strength in being who you are, come what may, and there is power in that.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i think i can catch you

    i don't think you're that fast lol

    BUT SERIOUSLY

    i really feel the growth here poet

    you keep pushing

    keep doing the right thing

    and keep standing your ground


    peace
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    lolololol .... ^^^

    trust me I'm quick.... hitting fences and everything!!

    thanks everyone ya'll really inspire me when you write...
     
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