Black Poetry : Here & Beyond

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aaliyahmonet, Aug 7, 2002.

  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm here and you're beyond,
    Why do we seem so far away,
    You live 1000 miles from me,
    And its hard for me to come see you,
    Remembering the good times we had,
    I laugh myself to death,
    I wake up the next mornin,
    Feelin restless and everything,
    It's rainin outside,
    Looks like a lot of teardrops,
    I wish i could cry rain,
    But my cry's won't stop,
    The sunshine is bright beyond us,
    I can't see you, you can't see me,
    I'm here and you're beyond me.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    nicely written

    keep writing

    pd :)
     
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