Black Poetry : Her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BioRhythm, Jun 6, 2005.

  1. BioRhythm

    BioRhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Her

    her eyes: dark depths of the ocean, life giving

    her heart: natures rhythmic nurturing- a mother’s pure call

    her voice: sugar sweet, lingering peace of a chocolate delight

    her mind: brilliant as brightly colored rainbows filling barren skies

    her soul: flames burning bright, searing, cleansing my soul

    her: she is Shanice a divinity among mere women a beauty among beasts

    she is love...

    her love: pure joy, ecstasy enveloping my soul

    her touch: the feel of satin, so soft so unique

    her beauty: waterfalls, showering glittering raindrops over valleys

    her grace: silver swans in flight, sleek windblown feathers glittering in the light

    her laugh: a larks chirp in great joy, soft musical notes in mine ear

    she is love... my heart, my life

    she is Dominique
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well brotha the images here were so pretty, and it had such a calm serene feel to it. I enjoyed the flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very delightful and beautiful well done poet !
     
  4. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I ask myself, how can someone have such deep feelings for another? Can't wait to read more.