Black Poetry : HER

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, May 20, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had one thought to many bumping into her
    I walked passed and she sent my emtion in a blur
    WHOA..............
    Lets back up for a minute....................
    Im suppose to be this masculant man,
    How and the hll does she have me in the palm of her hands
    Without even a touch or one single kiss,
    Im feenin for something I never had,
    Dmn she got me like this!
    Desperate to meet her, carry on a conversation
    SSShhhhh to be frank!
    Im invisioning erotic recreations
    I know, I know, Im way ahead of myself
    And I need to get a grip
    Im wondering if she knows that Id cash in all my chips!
    Turn my life over to her in full devoutness
    In so many ways Ill never be the same, with or without this
    I know Im saying this, but I really mean you
    You've made an image reallity, gave life a different view!
    For this small moment you've stopped my life in its track
    For the rest of my life I will clinge to that
    Nobody can ever say I havent gazed at perfection
    And for this I say THANK YOU, Im glad we connected!

    Lj
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop whoaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    connection made
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like someone is smitten. Just think, all of this could happen, why not....Lovely write.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The power of a woman... :sand: ...the script was very nice...thanks for sharing it.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    tight all i can say
    flow on.... :hot:
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks for the read Ffffam :spinstar: :spinstar: :angel1:
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight read. What woman wouldn't want that kind of reaction? :court:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw, that was so sweet. I was feeling it. Nice read and a magnificent drop. Much love brother.