Black Poetry : Her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Apr 26, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Her life
    Became overwhelmed with fatigue

    Created with a gift
    And ability to breathe

    Life,love,passion
    Into harmonious destiny

    Achieved
    Made Corrections
    And revised and edited

    Pursued
    Followed through

    And at the speed of light
    Like~Criptinite
    Became her strength

    Lonely
    As she could be

    Fed her desire
    With books and poetry

    Foreign Language and sweet melodies
    Became Her recipe

    To coast into neautral
    Into the supernatural

    Blinded by love
    Lost
    And once knew

    AT the beginning used to know Him
    And as Him and Her
    Became closer

    Enjoyed eachothers space
    And grew fonder
    In the midst of absence
    From one another

    Began to desire
    So much stronger

    And crushed
    Eachother

    Reckless love
    Indefinately
    Torn apart

    Love could not linger
    In our hearts

    And we turned away
    From what we said
    Would last for eternity

    Him and Her
    Went his and her own way

    Still to this day
    She can hear Him say

    I'm goin to miss you
    Subtely suggesting
    It won't be the same with out you

    And He knew she missed him too.

    Her journey
    Would be alone
    Never knowing
    It would be so long

    Her journey
    Became her own

    And until death do us part
    He could hear her say

    I love you
    Silently exchanged
    Contact

    In theirs dreams is where they met
    Meeting eachother
    And the secrets and vows they kept

    And his heart will always remain with Her
    And she can feel him
    Painfully go through
    So bittersweetly
    Never see her again
    And in His heart
    He will never forget
    But remind himself always of her
    Because with out her
    He can not ((( )))
    And lay awake at night
    And hopes and prays
    That who ever comes her way
    Treats her good
    Because He lost the onely love
    He really had
    With Her
    With Her
    With Her
    And knowingly and painfully
    She keeps these memories
    Silently hidden away
    In Her alabaster box
    Inside of Her
    Her
    Her
    Memory

    Desert Storm
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin' the flo of this piece, desert storm. keep on scribin', because it's tyght.
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks lister

    Yeah, I know this was long but thanks so much. I kinda went over board lol. Thanks again
    Desert Storm
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STORMY....

    you didn't go overboard... don't stop your poetic flow

    by worrying about the length of the piece... (a wise man
    to me that once & i listened)

    i loved your look into "Her" world. thank you for sharing!

    NothinButLove...
    SunShyne~
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Sunshyne

    I needed to hear that. Thanks for the words,you always been comin through for me sis. I really appreciate it so much. Stay strong and sweet gurl.
    Love always,
    Desert Storm
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this 1 flowed...

    like da Nile....upwards...and I felt so much emotion held within...the power which is you :)
    Makes me wanna cry.....
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Two Fish!

    You know I am so uplifted by you. You are a singer as well,and I know that I'm going to be singing soon. So you show me a light at the end of the tunnel because singing is my passion and my dream. I love to sing because I love music but I also like to sing from my heart and soul. And would love to have somebody work with me to show me how to write songs and put my poetry into songs. Yea,well umm.Thanks for the reply's I appreciate it. I really do.
    Desert Storm