Black Poetry : Her Voyuer

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  1. Girsol

    Girsol New Member MEMBER

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    ..soft light dances across her body,
    warm golds mixed with spicy browns..
    immersed in darkness, he watches her thru his window,
    barely breathing, jealous of her light..
    trembling hands wipe at the moisture,
    from his breath on the glass
    he shivers,
    and wonders why everything has
    to get in his way,
    to her..
    languid hands run thru her mass of hair,
    while obsidian eyes hungrily gaze at her reflection,
    in her window..
    he loves her, he is sure of it
    thru his cold window
    into her world..
    she smiles at him,
    a blush really..
    as his hands grasp her from behind,
    she begins to move..
    slowly,
    while he watches her,
    watch herself
    be loved..
    he can not see her now,
    not through the tears..
    and she can not hear the glass breaking
    through her moans....
     
  2. Destee

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaay Girrrrrr ... sol :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Beautiful Poetry. So sorry that it's just getting to the page. It seems that you may have chose to include a poll when you were creating your thread, but did not follow through with all of the poll prompts, so this beautiful peace was sent to the Moderator's queue where it has been waiting patiently to be released. We don't moderate poetry, so we rarely check over there ... my apologies. Please give us more. Please make yourself at home.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within

    welcome to da playground of destee's place
    welcome to da flowz of many showz
    as i watch from above da $$RICH$$ one
    sends u luv within yo vibe dat u scribe
    welcome to da family !
    :) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :star:
     
  4. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this was an intoxicating blend of words, images, and colors that lends to a heightening of the visual and mental senses while reading this piece. Very well written. I look forward to reading more.
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was AMAZING, really, like a mini movie. I loved reading/watching this piece.
     
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    hey girsol........i saw the view .....
    nice poem......but dont do that to youreself yo
    and yes i,m looking also forward to reading more......
    or maybe like HER voyager part two...

    and than his new neigbour nocks on his door and he opens the door........and a heavenly voice enters the room and said "'are you alright ''.................i heard a glass breaking.....by the way my name is Alight....

    sorry i dont know what got in to me ......but i,m kind off sensitive now with story,s or poems whit a sad ending.......
    but i really liked the pierce gisrol....and i respect it how it is..
     
  7. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome, welcome, awesome! Loved it.