Black Poetry : HER VOICE speaks out !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Her voice speaks
    making me weak
    have me thinking
    in my sleep

    her voice speak
    like silent whispers
    sexy soft lace
    so sweet and meek
    i heard her
    last night

    her voice was so
    warm and lovin
    the sound make u
    wanna
    she said
    come and get it
    in my mental
    i was deeper in it

    the rapture of feelin
    felt inside from her
    voice i ride
    she was love
    like unspoken vows

    if she knew my true heart
    and felt as i do
    nothing can keep dis love
    from being true
    in transition a path of hope
    to teach and guide do what's
    right da light is bright
    i vision her warmth
    but do she know my true love
    the emotions flow
    from her voice
    i made a choice
    can she believe this be real
    and the depth of her dat i feel
    do she hear the magic word
    her voice is all i heard
    in the mist of night

    now i sit in my chambers
    looking out cross millions
    of galaxy's and bite the orbs
    of notions
    her voice was so sweet
    kissin me deep wit a twist
    amazingly my love is strong
    my love is deep
    can she feel it is the question
    dat i speak
    i feel all :flirt: from her voice
    like a :spank: ing to my head
    her passion is red :hot:

    tonight her voice made me go :nuts:
    as we sip :coffee: as i listen intently
    my words had her going in :spinn:
    i believe it was act of :love:
    she an pure :angel1: and my :heart:
    just lone for her touch i need :help:
    i'm :luv: love struck we :read: each
    other so well feelings swell
    i love how she lick her :lips: i have
    a devil :grin: as love set in freaky
    style so i just look and smile :look:

    her voice make be i'm :confused:
    or just in :luvv: or could it be i'm :sleep:
    from her voice i made my choice
    so hears da :deal:
    of what i feel all so real
    her voice is ahhhhhh! mix with ummmm!!

    :crying: but she may never undestand that
    and my true love i have to give so i'll just
    drop a :bomb: and :wave: to this letter

    p.s
    Da rapture of my heart and love of my soul
    da essence of reality is near tyme she say
    hello !!!!
    speak up babe ......................
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow emotions flowin
    from the soul within da heart
    i enjoyed reading this...it was deep..wow
    a pure love you have... :luv:

    lol ever thought you may drive her :nuts:
    and she :spank: her self and all :confused:
    we to feel the same way as feelins roam..
    so ya hold on.....just a :angel1: veiw...

    much love Richie Rich
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my my my!!!!!!!!!!! man.....****... i can feel the intensity and the love and the pureness of the love..this is amazing..

    lo'
     
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    whoa, whoa, $$RICH$$ !! I'm in love with this stanza right here:

    now i sit in my chambers
    looking out cross millions
    of galaxy's and bite the orbs
    of notions


    that is so beautiful. what an amazing tribute to your lady, my friend. wow!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Angel................Thank u
    from the rapture of her
    vioce i seal by fate
    and my love rise at rapid
    beat she was warm given
    a vision of love from the tone
    i look into her soul a
    million tyme and found what
    i lone for ....may she now accept
    my love & heart and let us
    journey da path of transition
    together i wanna love her
    respectfully....

    sistah lo'.........................
    the beauty of her
    was cast in her voice
    the tone of love we
    kissed words a million
    tyme and touch souls
    through mental play
    she has this tingle
    i can feel so i watch her
    daily and comfort her at
    night she speaks so soft
    i become ro-man-tic-ly
    under the hope of us
    cyber no longer become far
    she near my heart ...Thankz

    gempis ...................much luv sis.
    i sit at the table
    in my chamber
    and the slumber of
    her voice rapidly
    speakin
    awaking my heart
    and i still hear
    the voice of reason
    we cross at the road
    and i feel da warmth
    my love weaved
    beckon her in to me
    her voice.............indeed
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, whoa, $$RICH$$ !! I'm in love with this stanza right here:

    now i sit in my chambers
    looking out cross millions
    of galaxy's and bite the orbs
    of notions

    I agree with Gempis. These four lines could stand alone and just be...poetry.
     
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    I love it!

    Rich... I must say this is one of the best pieces I've ever read from you...
    loved the way you put this down...
    and then the creativity in the ending yet the message was
    not jeapordized by it...but strengthened...wow

    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watzinaname.............
    thank u she spoke so soft
    and so sweet her voice took
    me in deep and my true love
    seep out unto her soul if she
    only know my heart and love

    angelicsage..........................
    o'may this mean a lot from a poetic sistah
    it was my heart speaking loud from the love
    i vow and hold for the day that moment she
    spoke to my heart her tone of voice made me
    love her deeper then she know
    i wish she knew my inner feelings and all i lone
    to do not sexually but mentally she my
    shinning starz sitting in the north

    Thankz Queenz y'all help make my bliss for her
    heard even better hope she feel da same way
    and read this poetic letter.........................$$R
     
  9. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****!

    this was hot Rich, you sound familiar. or maybe we both just know and agree on how nice it feels to feel this way.


    Roni
     
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    AfroBoricuaRoni...........indeed da feelin is sweet
    we agree yes we both know how this feel thankz

    Olakuoto...........
    yes indeed sistah
    her voice was a tone
    to enter my heart
    her sound of whisper
    and the wordz she spoke
    made me feel so complete
    i lone to have her now
    i wish under starz to kiss
    her everlasting
    and embrace her soul
    she was the nighten gal of love
    to my heart ....Thankz
     
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