Black Poetry : " her secret garden"

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your secret garden
    l have entered
    and picked the fruit
    left hanging on your soul
    and now l am tasting
    you with my mind heart spirit
    plum desires
    herbal needs....
    sights of your ebony streams
    capture me
    poetry is being spoken to me-
    divinely written by your essence...
    immerse me with all
    your woman
    until you see an overflow
    of your will
    may it flow to the
    meadow until it reaches the hill
    until all the secret passages
    of your garden are revealed..​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this driped like sweet juices off the maple tree
    awesome tyte write from her secret garden
     
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    Wow...such vivid earthy images painted within a field of calm. This was so peaceful and beautiful brotha poet.
     
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    Release me, for my herbs sprout from the ground ...for freedom
     
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    I seem to have this affect on people...
    but I never expected a poem... :)
    you're just so sweet...j/k


    Seriously... this was

    sooooooooo, smooth and inntoxicating :star:

    You let your soul speak for you on this one...

    loving the flow!
     
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    Well thats why you been gone so long huh QQ

    all up in da garden doin... :read: "stuff" lolol

    beautifully written my brotha so wonderful to have you back :)
     
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    J'hiah = the language that love speaks.
     
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    wow..gosh..wow..
    j'hiah oh this is so sweet
    i am capture by the delicate
    words of love
    display on this here canvas
    wow again ..yeah

    Peace
     
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