Black Poetry : Her poetry/His

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by justbnme03, Mar 23, 2004.

  1. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fellas this one is for yall too, simply replace the hers and the shes and feel what it is thats to be felt!


    Sitting in her incent smoke filled room
    Writing her sensual poetry I assume
    She looks above for words to consume
    With her pen and inspiration already in tune
    She struggles with life’s uncertain dunes
    From jobs to happiness and love too
    She do what she needs to do to make it through
    Her poetry offers motivation on paper
    And her expectations are greater because there’s no use for an eraser
    Reading til she remembers what is permanently in place
    She begins to purse her expectations and feels safe
    She’s reassured and stares out into space
    Because once again her poetry is her saving grace
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    likes
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is peace!

    Thanks for sharing


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  4. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thxs mzblkangel and cocobutterskyn for feeling my flow.
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...

    I feel as tho ur talkin to me, but i know ur not. lol. but i like it...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, that ability to express can be a definite Godsend, and you expressed this well.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin the inner feeling of this peaceful scribe
    flow on now !!
     
  8. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poeticlyspeakin, watzinaname, $$RICH$$ thxs for feeling the flow fam!
     
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    Envy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice. Perfect images you granted. I like mos def.

    E :spinstar:
     
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    this is a lovely scribe
    you have compose
    on this canvas
    very nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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