Black Poetry : ...her pain ain't like mine.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Mar 8, 2002.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...her pain ain't like mine.
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoowee!

    I think you are right--it sho ain't like yours--I felt this one all the way down here in Dallas--Amun-Ra

    ;)
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ra. all the way in Dallas, huh?? well ****! this one
    must be betta than even i woulda thunk! :D thanks for
    takin' the time!! i'm honored by your presence! fa real!
     
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    Oh My Dayuuummm!!!!

    Elayne,

    It pains me to say that I think this piece will just

    HURT some folks!!!! :laugh:

    Very, very well done BG!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue. ...soooo! you liked this one, huh?? :D
    well... you just remember what i said!! thanks for
    puttin' your big stamp of approval on it for me!
     
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    okay! let me just say that the first line was deep, then the rest just sucked me under. Big sis, I know u feel this one cause I felt
    it all up in my bones, and that ain't no lie. I'm truly impressed. Can
    some of your inspiration come bite me in the ***?
     
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    Sunshyne....you got me speechless with this one...
     
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    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dannggg Sunny. (and that's all I've got to say about that)
     
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    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aye caramba!!!!!!!! - i had to read it three times to let the wurdz sink in!

    tyte flow sistah.
    dee:jumping:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa
    you are amazin' sis.
    how many shades of love can you represent ?
    see why you're the best right?

    jh.
     
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