Quiet Poetry Lounge : her name is

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticAlize, Jan 5, 2006.

  1. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    her name is tattoed
    on what is hers
    permenatly placed there
    so there would be no doubt
    her name rolls of my tongue
    in the heat of passion
    in the whisphers of emotions
    in a voice of innoncence
    her name causes me to smile
    cuz she's mine
    cuz im heres
    cuz we are we
    her name is the tangent
    of the abstract that i hold dear
    her name is...
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flow her name is this some kind of woman. to have you passionately writing bout it. cant wait to read more of ya so flo on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    Her name is imprinted
    On the mind and soul I see
    Nice flow poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome .....i wouldn't change one word
     
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    Wonderful flow... Thanks for sharing
     
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    her name is the tangent
    of the abstract that i hold dear

    THAT IS NOTHING BUT SOME NEXT LEVEL LOVE RIGHT THERE YOU CAN'T FAKE THAT KINDA LOVE. I LOVED READING THIS POEM I MIGHT HAVE TO READ IT A COUPLE MORE TIMES KEEP DOING YOUR THING.
     
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