Black Poetry : Her mid(name)dle

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    profundity was her mid(name)dle
    reading me from the inside out
    extracting my mental madness
    with proclamations that resound
    true / "that I don't breathe in" /
    did I "realize that tomorrow came
    and went undetected, flying
    beneath the sonar of my consciousness,
    that I still exist in today" / she asked,
    as she layed me down on
    the operating table to rid me of
    a malignant stoicism that locks me
    in confinement / solitarily / destroying
    exhalations and my minds solidarity
    .....................and stale air pollutes my
    thinking...............recirculated to "counter"
    clockwise movement suspending me
    in a blakhole / trapped in a state of
    counting "numb"ers backwards so I continue
    to feel nothing / pro(FUN)dity was her
    mid(name)dle / she stated as she
    took her pen and cut away the dead gray
    matter and placed it in the field to kill
    the weeds so I could be father to
    her unblemished scribe that breathed life into
    me...

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dime!!!!!


    Respect
    GQ
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    And you should know that
    I'm standing on my chair at
    work -- 'a standing ovation'
    from out of this world ~

    Because I truly felt this
    one shake the earth
    beneath my feet ~ it was
    just that damned DEEP!


    :heart:n' this piece of YOU!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all.

    one love,blak
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when I read you, I always

    whisper the question "how does he do it?" ~ because deep within me, I know that's something only God can answer!

    Flow my eloquent bruvah! FLOW!!!

    a
     
  6. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On Point

    This was truly On point easy to visualize your thoughts! Keep it flowin like the Nile.
    One!
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    yo PROFUNDITY b smoking. Keep ma plate full.