Quiet Poetry Lounge : Her LOVING by CANDLE Light

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    For today i let my candle glo

    da light of love, what it sho
    flickering flames like her sway
    how it dance, then it play

    My heart is filtered by da heat
    and have my soul caressin it's beat
    words i lone yet can not speak
    yet beside her i feel complete

    Upon my lips her liquid lava pour
    against my body her love grow
    sparkling in da depth of night
    she was my beloved candle light

    I lone her phenonmenal embrace
    da light of her is like love to trace
    in my arms as i envision her face
    she was my candle thy heart never erase

    As we end our stay in a secert place
    by da warm flickers of an fireplace
    my spirit whispers in da moments of us
    while my love render in submissional trust

    Her love by candle light
    something i nolonger can fight
    i need her beside me tonight
    to compromise her this love is right

    Let Da Candle Burn Bright !
     
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    Jazzytude Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice! I love candles! It kinda reminds me of a Poem I wrote! Something about that flickering flame that calms the spirit.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes it do relax ya candles and how they flicker ........Thankz for da read and visit.
     
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    I enjoyed the candles flicker
     
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    Lovely flow!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Angel2

    Thank you Goddess,Ink
     
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    upon my stance dance a glo
    da shadow wiggles is flames
    as my soul relax on love
     
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    You know, Brother Poet $$RICH$$, you have an uncanny ability...one I truly admire. I often reread some of your love pieces and each time, regardless of when they were written or to whom (or not), I always read them as if you are directing your words towards me...and then I smile. I hope this is a gift you never lose. I love this piece. Thank you for sharing. (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you very dearly for such warm and graceful words
    which make me smile and feel wanted in the poetic world of poetry
    your very dear to me .........:)
     
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    ...and you to me (smile)
     
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