Black Poetry : Her Love

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  1. coey30

    coey30 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She has said thing that hurts me to my core.
    Bold and blunt, no tact for sure
    Like a cold rusty blade that pierce my Heart
    This love was not like this at the start
    But my lies brought to a level where she began to hate
    Although I made changes to better me, to change my fate

    See I love hard and deep
    There has been no other love that I seek
    It’s my past that sometimes makes me weak
    But it’s her love that my heart keeps...

    Nothing worth having is easy... the start
    But my lies brought to a level where she began to hate
    Although I made changes to better me, to change my fate

    See I love hard and deep
    There has been no other love that I seek
    It’s my past that sometimes makes me weak
    But it’s her love that my heart keeps...

    Nothing worth having is easy...
     
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    Asomfwaa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes. I feel this.
     
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    noble_moore Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice rymes
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true dat well felt bruh !!!
     
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